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Shuuichi, February 11th, 2010, 12:36 pm

I hope this page is somewhat clear.

Please let me know if you are confused about anything related to PbM. Or if you think there are adjustments I could make to my storytelling or the page layouts, if you would like to give me some constructive criticism. PbM is largely a practice exercise for me, but I still love doing it and want it to be good, and any help you could give me would be greatly appreciated.

Additionally, I've designed a layout for the main page of an external site for it, so that should be put up eventually.

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User Comments:
flynfreako, February 11th, 2010, 1:39 pm

smexy looking characters :0

Kaoru-chan, February 11th, 2010, 8:17 pm

The story is getting more and more interesting. You are doing an amazing job Shuu! I can't wait for more.

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